Fantasy

#1

I was thinking that I haven’t done any work in a while so this is what I made.

#2

Text is too dark, hard to read on a laptop with low brightness. The swipes look nice, but the black doesn’t do good with the background. Two darks shouldn’t be put together.

All together, I’d give it 4/10.

#3

[quote=“ox random xi, post:2, topic:466524”]Text is too dark, hard to read on a laptop with low brightness. The swipes look nice, but the black doesn’t do good with the background. Two darks shouldn’t be put together.

All together, I’d give it 4/10.[/quote]
it’s supposed to be a dark peice.

Also, i’m not the best with graphics, I was just doing this to my previous thread when Frell helped me out.

#4

The foreground and backgrounds don’t contrast, making it hard to read. I would try lightening up the text just a bit, so there is more contrast.

The overall design isn’t too bad though.

#5

2nd one is better imo. The font works better.

#6

not that hard to make. overall, good job, they look pretty nice.