First attempt in C4d

Hey guys, I made this text in C4d, this is my first attempt in C4d and am planning on adding this to a client background. Please tell me how I can improve and what I did good on. Thanks!!

wooah thats pretty cool you should make me one that says Shiftx :slight_smile:

why do you comment that everytime someone posts something lol stop you’re annoying.

and anyways, looking good. Not bad tbh.

Who said i asked for your opinion?

Who said that you’re an ignorant kid, oh yeah I did.
If you want one so bad, learn to request or make your own.

[quote=“KroniKz_, post:3, topic:538863”][quote author=angle2000555 link=topic=657699.msg4399618#msg4399618 date=1390259087]
wooah thats pretty cool you should make me one that says Shiftx :slight_smile:
[/quote]
why do you comment that everytime someone posts something lol stop you’re annoying.

and anyways, looking good. Not bad tbh.[/quote]

Thanks for the feedback!

[quote=“angle2000555, post:4, topic:538863”]Who said i asked for your opinion?[/quote]You did when you posted on a public forum used by thousands of members.

[quote=“Uncalled, post:7, topic:538863”][quote author=angle2000555 link=topic=657699.msg4399624#msg4399624 date=1390259727]
Who said i asked for your opinion?
[/quote]You did when you posted on a public forum used by thousands of members.[/quote]

Lol’d

What version of C4D are you using?

R12

looks pretty neat, i like the crumpled metal effects around the edges

Thanks :smiley:

[quote=“Uncalled, post:7, topic:538863”][quote author=angle2000555 link=topic=657699.msg4399624#msg4399624 date=1390259727]
Who said i asked for your opinion?
[/quote]You did when you posted on a public forum used by thousands of members.[/quote]Maybe hundreds…

[quote=“Pwnd, post:13, topic:538863”][quote author=Uncalled link=topic=657699.msg4399727#msg4399727 date=1390292359]

[quote author=angle2000555 link=topic=657699.msg4399624#msg4399624 date=1390259727]
Who said i asked for your opinion?
[/quote]You did when you posted on a public forum used by thousands of members.
[/quote]Maybe hundreds…[/quote]Hundreds of common users. Thousands of people ‘use’ this forum.