Lime Green

#1

So I made this a while ago, but I haven’t posted it on here yet. I didn’t use any outbound images, just filters and a couple standard brushes.

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#2

Lines look awkward, focal point is hard to hard to focus on, layering effects look just plain awkward. I recommend scrapping the brushes and making the lines yourself.

#3

The lines were a chrome-wave filter. Not a brush.

#4

[quote=“Xellium, post:3, topic:463730”][quote author=reyx7 link=topic=567351.msg4123113#msg4123113 date=1350004279]
Lines look awkward, focal point is hard to hard to focus on, layering effects look just plain awkward. I recommend scrapping the brushes and making the lines yourself.
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The lines were a chrome-wave filter. Not a brush.[/quote]

Still looks rather hideous. As a whole the piece just has to much going on.