Lol wieny hut jrs

#1

ok i made this in 4 million milliseconds? tell me if you like it, if you hate it then ok i luv u 2.

ok lewk at this!

#2

Looks sexy, it could have a little more smoke over it. The paint splat in the top left corner looks too bland.

#3
wieny hut jrs.
i thought this was something spongebob related :|

looks good though :stuck_out_tongue:

#4

I brought this into photoshop for a few minutes, mostly because green is my favorite color. I tried to keep it like you had it and not change the entire thing

Im not a sig person, this is probably only my second one ever lol. But this had alot of potential

  1. Cool it on the fractals/splats, less is more
  2. If you ever use that font again kill yourself
  3. You need more of a border
  4. Color variation, I added hints of blue
  5. Use (but dont overuse) scanlines, they help add detail without overcomplicating it, they also wont detract from the text
  6. The original image was left-heavy, but I see you countered that with the text location, I used that big splat blob on the right to level it out
  7. Composition > elements, get a solid foundation before throwing everything on it. In this case I would have done the clouds first for balance and then plopped in a few things here and there
  8. Yours looks like all the effects are the same distance away from the viewer, notice how mine has more depth
  9. I bet you didnt notice theres no #6
  10. or 4

heres a breakdown of what I did (its a gif):

1 - Your original
2 - Balanced the green and black more, made it so green doesn’t abruptly end at the edge of the sig
3 - added cloud highlights for further balancing
4 - scanlines to make it feel more solid without adding more stuff
5 - blue hint
6 - border

As for text, im usually pretty bland. Bold basic fonts, simple placement, nice blending but good readability:

Try not to make text stand out so much that you’re forced to see it, try and have the focal point of the image lead your eyes to the text

hope you learned something bro

#5

I actually did, thank you so much. I really liked yours and I like how you put green variations which made it look better, thank you!