My First Real Work Piece

#1

I have made a few previous works but they were pretty bad. I have decided to make my name twice, one based on the tutorial that BasiX made, then the other off my own knowledge I would like to know what you guys think.

First piece, (based off of BasiX tutorial)

Second piece, (off my own knowledge)

Click [URL=https://www.moparisthebest.com/smf/index.php/topic,667062.0.html/]HERE[/URL] to go to BasiX’s tutorial.

#2

i suggest getting new fonts.

#3

Lol what do you recommend?

#4

First one: You can hardly make out the name. The D looks like a mutated S or Z…

Second one: Looks like you were trying to copy GTA’s style… Really not much else to say…

#5

Avoid Basix’ tutorial and you will be fine.

#6

Keep working. Your fonts are horrific. If you are not already aware of this site…

dafont.com