My second signature using c4d

#1

Hey guys, I made this gimp just now, tell me what you think. Rate 1-10 please :smiley:

#2

Say I had another character in there, what would you think of it then? Iā€™m fine with criticism, its my first one, I want to learn what I did wrong and if I could fix it :stuck_out_tongue:

#3

Did you just slap some abstract crap over your render/font?

#4

I USUALLY adore stuff like this, however, it doesnā€™t seem right, the abstract ā€œcrapā€ (as one calls it above me) on the left seems to be ā€˜weirdā€™, not sure how to explain it. I would re-do this one and see what your second outcome would be, otherwise Iā€™d give this about a 1.8/10.

#5

2, considering the effort you put into your typography is little to none. Seeing this lets me know it probably took just as much effort to make the rest of the image as well.

You got it in you, give more effort into something you post for criticism.

#6

Thanks for your opinions guys! They will all help me get better as I go along.

#7

Alright mate, first of all I donā€™t like the use of colors, youā€™re using too much red. The flow would be better if it was like this: http://i.imgur.com/hoSC2.png. I donā€™t like the placement of the text neither font nor color. The next time try using more colors to give life to your piece, and donā€™t add so many effects with the same color. Once again, you should watch some tutorials so you can improve.

#8

You should look at my new thread names My third signature using c4d, and with that green I thought it looked super crappy.

#9

You wonā€™t add that green to your signature :fp: Iā€™m talking about the flow of the signatureā€¦
Please watch some tutorials so you can understandā€¦

#10

C4d? Ur using Gimp??

#11

Using c4d renders I meansā€¦ But guys, I know this one isnā€™t too good, please check out my new one, My third signature using c4d.