New siggy

#1

Here it is. Please give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, I know I have A LOT of room to improve, I just need help to find out where.

Original render

#2

Not Bad, Not Bad. Continue Making GFX’s :smiley:

#3

That’s nice, good job! The only thing that I dislike is the text. It doesn’t blend too well and it hard to read.

#4

Yeah I suck at text in this situation. I need to look up some tutorials on blending text. Thanks for feedback.

#5

Maybe try just black text with a low opacity.

#6

I like it, I really do. But the text doesn’t quite fit with the image. Nice work!

#7

Thanks for feedback guys. Ill really spend more time on the text next time :stuck_out_tongue:

#8

Well, there’s just too much green. It all doesn’t blend in well with each other. The text, as everyone has said, also doesn’t go well with anything. It’s bold, and stands out. Your name should be more hidden so it doesn’t draw too much attention away from the focal point. Speaking of which, you’re lacking that. I don’t see a focal point at all. Also, in your picture, it’s hard to tell the difference between the effects and the render’s arm. If someone never saw the original render, then he could easily mistake that for something else. Your depth & lighting could also use a little touching up. You could darken the shadows to adjacent to where you set your lighting point. Well, the depth on this one isn’t so bad, as the render itself comes with a drop shadow. But, could be touched up either way. Good luck on your next GFX.

#9

Make it bigger like 450x200 and it will be much easier to modify to look good.

#10

Thanks for the constructive feedback :smiley: