New Style, Don't Know If I Like It

Yo what’s going on guys, it’s Zaiin, or Nuu here, presenting my new style, RUST. I think it’s pretty sick but let me know what you think :P.

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Could use ALOT of work. All you did was add text and faded it a little bit.

What are you talking about? I made the background, the render, and everything in there…

But the text on the background doesn’t really blend in, don’t know how to explain but you could try changing the font.

[quote=“Lil_Smok3r, post:4, topic:543307”]But the text on the background doesn’t really blend in, don’t know how to explain but you could try changing the font.[/quote]Dude, what the hell is wrong with you… this is great

[quote=“Justin Bieber, post:5, topic:543307”][quote author=Lil_Smok3r link=topic=662182.msg4426139#msg4426139 date=1400931114]
But the text on the background doesn’t really blend in, don’t know how to explain but you could try changing the font.
[/quote]Dude, what the hell is wrong with you… this is great[/quote]
Dunno, just my opinion

I don’t like the overlaying text or the screws in the render. Try taking those out and either just have the render and the background showing on a smaller layout (take away the edges of the picture and just have the render) or try adding something to the sides to make it look complete.

The text style doesn’t fit along with the background render. I believe that’s what people are attempting to say here.
And the screws you added to the background that are half-faded don’t really go along with it either. They almost look like they were just kind of tossed in there for extra detail.
You have lots of unused space in the image, and you concentrated most of the work into the center of it.
My point being you could make the image look like this and it’d have the same effect as your original.

Too dark can’t see it.