Robot

#1

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#2

I like it, The eye seems not right, IDK if that’s how it really looks but it looks pixelated

#3

its the bump map. i tried to tone it down as best I could while still making it noticeable.

#4

What’s a wheatley.
Looks good regardless, although I agree the eye looks a bit odd.

#5

It looks like it was made out of gym equipment. But its good, looks far better than anything I could ever make.

#6

yeah, i was lazy with the materials on this.
i made a more robot-looking character shortly after

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#7

[quote=“Cole1497, post:6, topic:443116”]yeah, i was lazy with the materials on this.
i made a more robot-looking character shortly after[/quote]
Much better

#8

that’s pretty sick.

#9

:smiley: I agree with eyeonyew it is alot better.

#10

Looks nice, I think it could do with flatter sides (as Wheatley has). At the moment it looks more like a personality core from Portal 1 but with a blue eye. But overall a brilliant job Cole.

#11

can I have your autograph? <3

#12

update

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sure
Cole1497

#13

[quote=“Cole1497, post:12, topic:443116”]update

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Cole1497[/quote]
Wow! I wish I could model half as good as that

#14

The modeling is the easiest. You can easily identify the primitives used and what was done with them.

I started with a few spheres roated 90 degrees, did some extruding on them after deleting a few segments, made the lense looking thing out of another sphere, the “eye” is also a sphere. The joints on the sides of the body are a few extruded cylinders, the joints are slightly shaped spheres, the “bones” are extruded cylinders, and the gun is just a bunch more extruding.

#15

[quote=“Cole1497, post:14, topic:443116”]The modeling is the easiest. You can easily identify the primitives used and what was done with them.

I started with a few spheres roated 90 degrees, did some extruding on them after deleting a few segments, made the lense looking thing out of another sphere, the “eye” is also a sphere. The joints on the sides of the body are a few extruded cylinders, the joints are slightly shaped spheres, the “bones” are extruded cylinders, and the gun is just a bunch more extruding.[/quote]
I’ll look into more when I get older, but thanks for this information!

#16

Just beautiful… Amazing… I don’t know any other words.

#17

[quote=“runescape sucks, post:13, topic:443116”][quote author=Cole1497 link=topic=545804.msg4002139#msg4002139 date=1338167318]
update

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Cole1497
[/quote]
Wow! I wish I could model half as good as that[/quote]selling coles autograph 300m!

don’t really like the update the flashlight or whatever that is just looks …off

#18

Just out of curiosity, how many polys does it have when you go to render it?

#19

65k, with tons of unnecessary loop cuts.

#20

As someone who is a topology nut, this makes me sad :frowning: although I’m sure it would be an easy fix if you planned to.
Looks decent over all, but I must say that the arms look off. I just don’t “Feel” them, if you catch my drift. I personally would look into re-conceptializing the robot. The legs are better, but I feel you could have done more with them too. I understand it is a robot, but I just cant see the arms and legs being, well, arms and legs. He doesn’t seem “balanced,” his center of gravity feels top heavy, in which case I would assume he has HUGE feet. If you scale the bottom of the legs out so that it tapers, it should feel more sturdy, a good reference to that would be mega mans legs.

Also, I am being pretty picky, but thats only because I’m speaking from one modeler to another, not to someone in the midst of learning the basics. Loving the body by the way.

Edit can you post a wire frame please?